Winter’omen


Winter’omen is a funny, reminiscent and emotional poem about winter in Geelong, blending experiences and comparisons. Written in 2003, Winter’omen explores the “feelings” of the people in and around the large town, from the country areas around Geelong to the inner metropolitan residents.



o how i wish winter would curse Geelong
where watched trains never boil
& out of service ATMs
are thrown under Belmont buses
how i wish
she’d undress foglonely fields, mountains, seas
with Antarctic weeping
& feet like coconut ice

she’s frosty Monday mornings,
especially Monday mornings in Geelong
(which wants to be bigger, like Melbourne)
Every 28 days Target has a 20% off undies sale
so the people on Ryrie Street
with icicle eyelashes
can be strapped into their knitting

winter is stubborn
like a Datsun 200B 1980
(may it rest in pieces)
& she incubates sheep statues in the fields.
Exposed by daylight
on the side of the Victorian train line
she makes you wonder
why life is such a long, fat mess
in this chaotic, wandering string of days
when half the calendar is forgotten.
She makes you hibermenstruate
& this confuses the Bureau of Meteorology

i guess winter is grumpy
‘cos she’s got PMS


“Winter’omen” is an excerpt from the book Things Like Sunday & Other Poems by Suzanne Day.


Things Like Sunday & Other Poems
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About Suzanne Day

I’m a professional writer, seo blogger and poet from Melbourne, Australia. During the day I work as a graphic/web designer at Inkfluence and at night I make eclectic jewellery, handcrafts and create other things with my hands. I love writing fiction, non-fiction and contemporary poetry. More about this author...

Comments

  1. Geelong Girl says:

    This poem cracked me up! It definitely reminds me of Geelong. There’s a lot of “us” versus “them” in Geelong against Melbourne people and the way the city has changed in the past ten years, it’s pretty funny to go to the city centre now and see the attitudes of the yuppies.

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